A Short Writing Excerpt: The Girl with Scarlet Hair

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As Jeffery thought about what to do, his hands over his ears, incapable of drowning out the crying, he felt a silent tap on his shoulder. He whirled around, and was faced by a girl. She looked around his age, but he had never seen her before. She stood; enveloped in a black hoodie, face pointing timidly to the ground. Her flaming scarlet hair whipped in and out of her jacket, in the wind, her hands placed timidly behind her back. She looked upwards, just for a second, her mysterious doe brown eyes staring at Jeffery, then quickly looking down back to the floor, planning to remain like that for the rest of her visit to Jeffery’s backyard.    

Sorry for the late post, everyone! This was supposed to be posted on Saturday. Due to exams, I've been really busy. I hope you've enjoyed this post! Bye!


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    1. Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed!

  2. Wow. This is lovely! <3

    xoxo Morning

  3. I must know more! I loved the ideas of "enveloped in a black hoodie" and "flaming scarlet hair".

    1. Thank you Oakstar! I'm glad that you like it!


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