8.20.2014

Poem (I don't know what to call it yet)

You were always there
until you were not
you disappeared
you were gone
your realness hidden away
lost in a circle of taunting fears
of nonacceptance                                      
caged by the veil
you laid upon yourself
concealing 
you,
your beautiful self
your strong emotions,
your deep thoughts.
I used to admire you
but how can I now
when you've changed everything about yourself? 




10 comments:

  1. Hello. I'd just like to say thank you so much for commenting on my blog posts, especially the one titled "Another post where I try to uplift myself while conveying a repetitious message to my readers.". Your comments really uplifted my day, and--they made me smile, as well as feel (much, much) better. :)

    You're a very amazing human being; you've blessed the world with your existence. I hope you know that. <3

    xoxo,
    Rose

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    1. I am glad that my comments made you smile! Thank you so much for the compliment at the end of your comment! That really means a lot to me!

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  2. This is a great poem! Very very inspiring. Keep up the great work!

    strawberriegirl.blogspot.com

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  3. This is such a nice poem!! I hate it when people you're close to start closing off and drifting away. Thanks for writing it. <3 Love your blog.

    -M
    http://thelyfoflittleme.blogspot.com.au/

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    1. Thank you! I hate when that happens too!

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  4. This is such an interesting poem! There's a Welsh poet who's name beings with D.... I can't remember his name but he was a really famous poet and you write like him >_<

    Amy // The Blog Hermit

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    1. Thank you! That is very nice of you to say!

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  5. I love this girl! She's an amazing poet, an amazing girl, and a true DG! Shine on! It was an amazing experience getting to meet her, and I hope we get to meet again! Love your summit bestie, Oakstar!

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    1. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I hope we get to meet you again too! You are a wonderful novel writer(I can't wait to read your novel whenever it publishes) a fantastic girl and an awesome friend! Bye!!!

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