7.18.2014

My Entry for Tane's Writing Challenge

   Hi!! This is my entry for Tane's writing challenge!

  

She Walks Along

Her heart
bruised,
beaten,
hurt,
she walks along
attempting 
to 
mask
her emotions
with
deceiving smiles.

Everyone knows,
know
that she is 
hurting.
Yet, 
absorbed
in themselves,
nobody 
gives
 help
so she 
walks along.

Hiding her 
emotions,
hoping
just hoping
that her 
beating
heart
will stop
she walks along- 
and it does.

12 comments:

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    1. Thanks!! Your blog is really nice too!

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  2. That was so beautiful, Jolly, and so true for so many girls. Thank you ever so much for entering. :)

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  3. Very thought-provoking. I like poems like this, where you don't give the reader all the details so they have to imagine a little.

    Ps. I tagged you for the Liebster Award on my blog :)

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    1. Thanks so much!
      P.S. I will have a post about the liebster award soon!

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  4. Amazing! I'm having a poetry contest! Check it out! If you do thanks! If you could spread the word that would be awesome too!

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    1. Thanks! I'll check your poetry contest out and spread the word!

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  5. This poem was very moving, and very thought provoking. You are a true poet.

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    1. Thanks! I really like your writing too(you know the one about the sisters?) !

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  6. Wow, this was amazing! I would love to see your masterpieces of writing more often! :)

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    1. Thanks! That was really nice of you to say. Your writing is amazing too!

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